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lirvilas
18th Apr 2016, 9:48 PM

TBH, the art doesn't improve that much.

Also, the writing isn't nearly as tight as it needs to be.

However, this is a complete work and I'm not planning on "improving" it, so if you've got criticisms I'd be glad to hear your PMs but nothing else.

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